1.
1).Rhyme (red words)
2).Hyperbole (light blue words)
3).Similar (dark blue words)
4).Personification (purple words)
5).Alliteration (yellow words)
a.Something that used for make the poem beautiful and make people have their own feels.
b.Rhyme.
c.Rhyme could make more powerful feelings. Also make the poem read beautiful.
2.This poem, I use one of the Canadian landscapes to show my own thought. A person, maybe he find nowhere to live or stand. He might be sad and embarrased. He might kill himself. But I want to say that a person live in the world just because he is existed. No one could rob one's life. Maybe he is not good at study or working, but there must be something that he could do and could do it well. God made him, must give him some advantages. If he in some trouble, sad, don't try to do something hurt himself or people arould him. Just wait and grinding. He would see the light from the sun.
3.A big rock find he is useless and could find nowhere to stand. He couldn't make food like wheats and rice. He couldn't use for buildings. He is sad. But finally, he found that he could be a landscape on the grass. He could face the sky. He became happy.
4.
1)Huge rocks are good things to support my opinion.
2)I love beautiful things.
3)Your work said "use Canadian Landscape", I couldn't use other things.
5.They would be sad about the poem but they would be happy about Canadian landscapes because they are beautiful and cool.
2009年5月13日星期三
2009年5月11日星期一
Mr. Rock
Mr. Rock
Cities and urbans not belongs to me.
Countries also not belongs to me.
Where would I stand?
Where could I stand?
I couldn't stand anywhere just because I am a gigantic rock that earth couldn't support me?
I couldn't stand anywhere just because I am not beautiful as famous buildings?
I couldn't stand anywhere just because I am not as useful as wheats and rice?
The answer is negative.
Like the fire could flame in the water,
Like the water could live with the fire.
All negative.
I am not useless because I am a landscape.
Without people, I am.
With people, I am.
I belong to the arts.
I belong to the God.
I should live in the world cause I am exist.
I shouldn't die cause my job is not finished.
Now, I am comfortable.
I am talking with the sky,
I am lying with the grass.
Talking, taking and telling.
Lying, Living and Life.
I am Mr. Rock.
No one could instead me.
2009年5月6日星期三
An Alliance with the Huron Empire
1.
An alliance is a group of countries or political parties that are formally united and working together because they have similar aims.
An alliance is a relationship in which two countries, political parties, or organizations work together for some purpose.
An alliance is a group of countries or political parties that are formally united and working together because they have similar aims.
An alliance is a relationship in which two countries, political parties, or organizations work together for some purpose.
The state of being allied or confederated a connection based on kinship or marriage or common interest; "the shifting alliances within a large family"; "their friendship constitutes a powerful bond between them"
An organization of people (or countries) involved in a pact or treaty.
An organization of people (or countries) involved in a pact or treaty.
2.
1) To get stronger.
2) To get more money.
3) To be more famous in the world.
3.
a.I could see two parts are fighting. They are very ago I think. They use bows and arrows. They battled at the bridge. Under the ships. There are many ships. On the back. There are many trees and many grass. Maybe the ancient battle are all like this. Such stupid.
b.Maybe. This bows and arrows are the real I think. But I don't think they could war at such a small bridge. They would die ugly. Especially the middle one.
This bay is surrounded by Sudbury, Parry Sound, Manitoulin, Bruce, Grey, Simcoe and Muskoka.
b. Bay is the lake surrounded or besides by a part of land. Like Bay Area in L.A.
5.This is the a photo of this bay. I like this picture. There are a beautiful beach. Cool island and a white ass man. Yeah. Also the lovely rocks.
6.I feel sad. I don't know why. When I see the dark yellow painting style and the lonely stick stickied in the rocks watching the river. I could feel the painter's lonely. When he draw this picture, I could feel his embarrassed. Maybe he had no friends beside him. I don't like this paint, make me sad and make me remember my ex-friends.
7.I feel the power and the sadness. The Canadian landscape would be very strong but lonely. The land is strong and cool. But it is a lonely land without friend. The author might be lonely that time like the painter paint the paint above.
8.I learned what is an alliance and it between two parts. The ancient war's style. The bay's mean. Canadian landscape in emotion and the art of the landscape.
2009年5月4日星期一
After Port Royal - Champlain Continues
1.This is a picture of the St. Lawrence River. I could see this is a really thin river and it is between the Quebec and the New Brunswick.
Also could see the U.S.A by the bridge of the New Brunswick.
2.This is a photograph of this lake. I have to say this is really magnificently. The new word I learned. I see the river and the falling sun. Also a couple of lands. They are watching each other.
3. For 3 reasons I think.
1-Safer than the land.
2-Easy to do trade between Quebec and New Brunswick.
3-To develop the sea-working.
4.I see a big castle, river and a ship. In fact, there are cites and sky which is also beautiful but not as cool as the castle. Ha ha. This is more like a magic town. A castle with the falling water and rivers. If this is an island. I would say I would buy it if I am rich.
5.a.Here is the towering cliffs.
b.This is the natural protection. With this, people could defence whatever natural disasters or human disasters. To use the nature things to protect ourselves, is a cool way to develop ourselves.
c.I learned river could be a transportation and how could them help people. And cliffs are natural forts.
BONUS: 1.First, it's good for defence. Then, good for people to swim. Finally, it's beautiful.
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