TOPIC :Exploration can create conflict and misunderstanding.
INTRO: a explorer Ozzy went to explore. find a new land. he 1- get on the land 2-travel on the land 3-get resources back to study. but guess what.
BODY 1: get on there but can't communicate cause different lauguage.
2: travel but with so many natives with suspects
3: want to take some resources to study but can't back and Osbourne take him back.
CONCLUSION: back usa and told the story.
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