2009年4月20日星期一

Black Hustler

One of Blacks’ Life

A new life came to the dark world, he was laughing when he came out, happily laugh. He was a black child, completely black. He was born in Brooklyn, New York. When he was 2 years old, he lost his father’s love, because his parents always anger, even fight. His mother always felled of the pain. She was really hurt by his father. So, they finally get over. She chose to grew their child by herself. She wanted the child to be a really big person. She wanted the child have a good life. Just didn’t like his father, a thug, every left with weed. This kid, he grew, gotting big, then dead.

He did very good in his primary school, he always did the best, studied very hard in his class. He said “ I will be very famous, rich and everyone in the world will know me ! ” He did really good in the exam to the junior high school. His mom is really happy about that. But because he was black, he couldn’t been in the best school that he already could go into by his perfect marks. He felt unfair. He was angry. He wanted to cry but he couldn’t. he knew he should strangle. For his mother and himself. He went into a school which felled of the black people. His mom cried at home but in her eyes, there were lots of hopes. This boy did really good job in his junior high school. But he had no friends. Seems like black boys don’t interested in study. He don’t care, all he wanted to do is try his best to do his own work. He went to the best school in New York, not as the junior high school. Stopped him just because of his skin. He went into the school and studied. But after 2 weeks, he left school because white students always paid bad feels on him. White students always told the teacher that he was dirty and he hated on white students. But he didn’t. he just acted his own character. A student, a good student. Finally, he left that school and he first said a dirty word. “ go fucking whites ”. He went to the black’s high school again. He was sad. One of his classmates, said to him “ try this boy, try this. ” said with a cigarette. Just because he is a good student, he said no. but the black boy said if he was a real black boy. Finally, he tried. But he felt so tired. He backed to the classroom and slept. When he woke up. The school is over. The second day, that boy did the same thing to him. And the third day. He started asking for money to his mom. Just because his mom thought he was a good boy and he had never ask for money. So she gave to him. He went to buy the cigarette. And started smoke. But he couldn’t feel enough. He met the boy at the school and asked him “why cigarette do not make me good?” “for sure.” Said by that boy. “cause I put some weed in the cigarette that I gave you.” The boy is very angry. Fight to that boy. “fuck you man. What are you doing ?” the boy never fight so he had blow by the boy and he couldn’t hit that boy. That boy said “do you want more. My blow or weed smoking? Work for me.” He couldn’t refuse. He know. He started help that boy to carry the drugs to other school which blacks wanted to smoke after school. Step by step. He had no time to go to school. Finally, he kicked out the school because he couldn’t catch the teacher and he had to work for that boy. If he didn’t, they would kill him. His mom wanted to die when she know them but the boy said to his mom “ I won’t feed the family when I dead.” So his black life started.

He started. Really started. This time, that boy came his dogg., with means his friend. He helped his dogg to carry drugs. In a time. He caught a thug from another hood which wants his swag. He was to brave and tried to save the swag. So he used his best to save the swag not to fight. Finally, he saved the swag but he was really injured. His big head was really frightened by him. He made him to trade the drug. A lil bit of the whole drugs. He did really well. After 2 months, just because he is hardworking, he run it already. But in a time. Because he's home boy, that one made him to smoke, told the police what he is doing because he had lots of Jealousy. He went into prison for 2 months. He couldn't believe that man could to that. When he came out, he murdered that motherfucker. This was the first time he killed people. the big daddy loved his bravery. Gave all that boy's swag and thugs to him. He was getting really bigger and bigger. He was really greedy when he saw cash and money. One thing was very good that he didn't forget his dear mom. Her mom didn't know what was his doing but she could get lots of money from his son. She always thanked the god to give such a good son. one time, he remembered one of his dreams when he was a lil kid. That is music. He wanted to be a singer. so he told his thugs to by a record room for him. He started to rap. Luckily, his rap was interested by lots of people in the U.S.A step by step. his big daddy who was his boss of his hood love it very much. Made him to the second-place in the hood. At that time, he was a money machine. he slept until 10, started doing his drug trade, then made hit songs, finally did things in the club with lots of girls whole night. The girls liked his big bo very much and got money from him. He felt very happy.

Life went on, just like it was before, but he became the big daddy of the L.A. he could do every thing he wanted. Whatever murders, traps, drug-dealing, and more. "Motherfucker policemen are paid by me. They are my dogs. Policewomen could call me and suck my thing if she want, ha ha." one day, when he went to the club to spend his night, he killed by that boy's son. He dead with a pity, to lead the California. Finally, his mom got lots of money. 17 millions. but she finally knew what did her son like. She cried every day. Finally, she gave her soul to the Jesus. This is a black's life, a black man.

I don't know how could you feel and how could you say. I just want to show my respect to all the black men. Maybe they did bad things, but we should show respect. They are really big men. I hope dear Obama could change blacks life. We believe in him. Both black hustlers and me. The biggest point is his dream is already achieved: “ I will be very famous, rich and everyone in the world will know me ! ”

1 条评论:

  1. A very creative essay but you need to keep the language appropriate for school. You cannot use that language in the classroom and for your work.

    It is very engaging and has a very unique voice but it cannot score a high mark because the language is offensive. Does that make sense? I know you worked very hard on it.

    Content 2.5/4
    Usage 2.5/4
    Style 0/4 (Offensive Language)
    Focus 3/4
    Organization 3/4

    11/20 x2 = 22/40

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