2009年4月15日星期三

Final Essay Plan

TOPIC :Exploration can create conflict and misunderstanding.

INTRO: a explorer Ozzy went to explore. find a new land. he 1- get on the land 2-travel on the land 3-get resources back to study. but guess what.

BODY 1: get on there but can't communicate cause different lauguage.

2: travel but with so many natives with suspects

3: want to take some resources to study but can't back and Osbourne take him back.

CONCLUSION: back usa and told the story.

1 条评论:

  1. 6/10

    Lacks detail but it gives me an idea of the structure of your essay.

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